Authors Notes:
Mr Lloyd took on the aspect of an automaton early on in the draft of the book. He seemed like enough of a tertiary character that I could change him thus and not offend a seasoned reader. In fact, he seems more kind in some ways than any Jane has encountered before. I have slightly edited his conversation and line of inquiry with Jane to indicate that he is seeking to diagnose her and in the process discovers it is more a psychological malady. I think he is sweet and would love someone to imagine him in drawing.